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tears beneath the willow
Contributed by
rain
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:27:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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always as the branches sway
always as the wind does sing
always as the clouds are gray
always always she does cry
curled up in a ball
beneath the leafy branches
of the age old willow
always always she does cry
time to her is meaningless
life to her is useless
breath to her is endless
always always she does cry
always as the branches sway
always as the wind does sing
always as the clouds are gray
always always she does cry
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Re: tears beneath the willow
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:30:14 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: tears beneath the willow
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:13:37 AM AEST
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| sadly, sweatly sung |
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Re: tears beneath the willow
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by gia0000 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 03:00:50 AM AEST
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| "curled up in a ball" explains how one feels when one is feeling gloomy.. i liked it. |
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Re: tears beneath the willow
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by Silent_Composer on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 03:05:37 AM AEST
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Very sad, but very well written
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Re: tears beneath the willow
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:22:21 AM AEST
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| beautiful, touching |
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