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Dear Life
Contributed by
gia0000
on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:48:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why? Why do you play such dirty games..
I wonder.. did your love break your heart?..
converting you into a scorned *****..
Why do you choose to play the pieces this way?
as simply as you mysteriously drop obstacles
in our voyage
couldnt you as smoothly abstain?
You wretched WITCH
where is your compassion?
Here we delight your sight
We cry,
We laugh,
We smile,
We frown,
We moan,
We supply inordinate pleasure
to your insatiable palate
and despite all our benefactions
you frenzy with attacking us
through all our weaknesses..
Tell me.. what do you take out of
such suffering
whats the point?
Are you trying to convince us
that in order for us to comprehend
what passion and felicity
really connote
we must undergo
agony and misery?..
Whats the big idea..
so many
cannot figure out your design,
you blur their path,
consequently they give up..
desperation snatches the best of them
leading to hopeless
dreams of
COULD HAVEsand
ONLY IFs
Copyright ©
gia0000
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2004-09-10 02:48:23]
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Re: Dear Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:00:03 AM AEST
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Strong and intense piece of work.
It really gets to me.
Keep it up.
Greetz,
Hur |
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