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Cant take the pain
Even though it never goes away.
You bleed me dry

Too scared to scream, Too scared to move
Wanting to shut my eyes and dissappear
But the fear never goes away
You scare me stiff

Too blind to see, Too blind to run
Cant take the darkness
Even though I cant guide my way out of it
You embrace me in your darkness

Too empty to feel, Too empty to fall
Dont know what to think
Always empty inside
You've taken away my emotions

Your taking away pieces of me
Leaving me with nothing
Making me empty, Yet still bleeding
Stuck in your darkness forever I shall be

Theres no return, For you've binded me and shattered my soul [comments] => 5 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 48 [informant] => xRotten_Insidex [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Gone

Contributed by xRotten_Insidex on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:25:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Too Weak to think, Too Weak to cry
Cant take the pain
Even though it never goes away.
You bleed me dry

Too scared to scream, Too scared to move
Wanting to shut my eyes and dissappear
But the fear never goes away
You scare me stiff

Too blind to see, Too blind to run
Cant take the darkness
Even though I cant guide my way out of it
You embrace me in your darkness

Too empty to feel, Too empty to fall
Dont know what to think
Always empty inside
You've taken away my emotions

Your taking away pieces of me
Leaving me with nothing
Making me empty, Yet still bleeding
Stuck in your darkness forever I shall be

Theres no return, For you've binded me and shattered my soul

Copyright © xRotten_Insidex ... [ 2004-09-12 13:25:26]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:32:24 PM AEST
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There's always those people out there that just kill us inside and take everything away from us...great poem

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:36:41 PM AEST
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an emotional write, very well written, the flow was great...I hope that one day you feel strong enough to rebuild your shattered soul *hugs*

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:39:13 PM AEST
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really really good write... flows very well, thanks for commenting on my writing.. take care
-x

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:57:28 PM AEST
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Another excellent write.

On days of darkness, its off to the park for me, to sit by the lake and sneak food to the ducks, and geese, and watch the children play......once in a while even luck seems to smile......and a female smiles at me......then its off in my mind to have a ball......before she nags constantly.

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 06:08:46 AM AEST
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This really quite dark,
A very good write!
Star x x x

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