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Array ( [sid] => 63490 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The One Who Observes... [time] => 2004-09-12 15:22:47 [hometext] => Yet another poem about how someone watches others and learns...especially from mistakes...what some do but many do not.... [bodytext] => Spoken words
Learned by no other
One of no life
That sits and notices the stone out of place
The crippled child that needs some help
The one who will lend their hand to help them
The one who sees
Who feels
That wants to learn from their mistakes
To better themselves and their lives
The one who observes what others do
That owns a heart that can only hold so much
Until it hits it’s point where it can’t take the pain that is shown
Where they break
And need time to heal
Thinking back on what had happened
Learning from each mistake
To once again gain what others do not… [comments] => 8 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

The One Who Observes...

Contributed by Pyrofungus on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:22:47 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Spoken words
Learned by no other
One of no life
That sits and notices the stone out of place
The crippled child that needs some help
The one who will lend their hand to help them
The one who sees
Who feels
That wants to learn from their mistakes
To better themselves and their lives
The one who observes what others do
That owns a heart that can only hold so much
Until it hits it’s point where it can’t take the pain that is shown
Where they break
And need time to heal
Thinking back on what had happened
Learning from each mistake
To once again gain what others do not…

Copyright Â© Pyrofungus ... [ 2004-09-12 15:22:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The One Who Observes... (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:30:49 PM AEST
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Great poem........once upon a time long long ago and far far away........I tried to me and then went away....

Thanks for sharing this.

Re: The One Who Observes... (User Rating: 1 )
by sober_punk_2 on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:35:25 PM AEST
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good poem i like ver much

Re: The One Who Observes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:45:26 PM AEST
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It's more than obsrvation, it's doing what a sponge does. So many observe without absorbing...Loved the poem. Great. A 9, but I can only give a 5...pthhhthrh.

Re: The One Who Observes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetheart on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:04:49 PM AEST
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Brialliant write. I enjoyed your use of words and the emotioins in this poem. It is all very true. Good job.

Re: The One Who Observes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:09:23 PM AEST
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thanks for sharing this piece i think this is an excellent write...

Re: The One Who Observes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:53:41 AM AEST
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I like this poem, I enjoyed the words in it, I really enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing it.

Re: The One Who Observes... (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:20:02 PM AEST
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wow great write keep up the great work!!!

later

cheech

Re: The One Who Observes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Buggsy on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:13:27 AM AEST
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Awesome poem! I thought that it was great. I wish that everyone could learn from their mistakes; some people are either too proud or too stupid to realise, or more to the point admit that they were wrong and therefore they can never learn and never grow. Great work.

Sean

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