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Sea Salt
Contributed by
comfortablynumb
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:17:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I kind of want to kiss him in the cold and salty ocean
And if his kiss was salty who would know?
And if I cried salty tears
Hed never have to know the truth
All my paralyzing fears
The surf pounding in my ears,
Like my rapid beating heart
And the voices in my head.
Hed only see me
And hed only see beauty
And hed only taste desire
Blinded by the salty spray
And thats all I want him to see.
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2004-09-12 18:17:56]
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Re: Sea Salt
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by Orlando on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:30:55 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful! I think I tasted salt water reading it. |
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Re: Sea Salt
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:40:54 PM AEST
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| The title drew me to read this and must admit it still has me searching for the deeper meaning behind the words. Quite different and interesting. June |
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Re: Sea Salt
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:14:56 PM AEST
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| Very sweet poem, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Sea Salt
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by THORN on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 12:18:24 AM AEST
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That is so good! Real nice, loved it! 5 starts! ;)
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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