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Array ( [sid] => 63512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fallen into a pit of love [time] => 2004-09-12 19:15:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've fallen into your pit
You planted a pit for me
Then you fell into it
I try to save you
but your pit caught me too
A eye-catching smooth hole!
Now I've fallen into it.

I can't get myself out, I just can't
Like butter on bread,
and like stamp at the corner of the envelope
so escape is not fitting for me.
My expectation seems to fly and fade away
Right now, you're the only,
the only thing on my mind.

I thought you'll never get me again that time,
guess I was wrong, you got me this time
You are the lion in my way,
the fierce lion in the streets
You are the cat in my face,
the gentle cat in the cave.
You are my everything now and then.

As your pit gets deeper,
so do I get deeply fallen in love with you.
You are too much, too wise in your eyes and conceit
I just don't have any control over myself
I have completely fallen into you
Like a fallen tooth or a foot out of joint.

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 2 [informant] => 03614 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Fallen into a pit of love

Contributed by 03614 on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:15:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I've fallen into your pit
You planted a pit for me
Then you fell into it
I try to save you
but your pit caught me too
A eye-catching smooth hole!
Now I've fallen into it.

I can't get myself out, I just can't
Like butter on bread,
and like stamp at the corner of the envelope
so escape is not fitting for me.
My expectation seems to fly and fade away
Right now, you're the only,
the only thing on my mind.

I thought you'll never get me again that time,
guess I was wrong, you got me this time
You are the lion in my way,
the fierce lion in the streets
You are the cat in my face,
the gentle cat in the cave.
You are my everything now and then.

As your pit gets deeper,
so do I get deeply fallen in love with you.
You are too much, too wise in your eyes and conceit
I just don't have any control over myself
I have completely fallen into you
Like a fallen tooth or a foot out of joint.

Copyright © 03614 ... [ 2004-09-12 19:15:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fallen into a pit of love (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:31:42 PM AEST
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Very beautiful compliment to a love.

Thank you for sharing.

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