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Array ( [sid] => 63556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For The Guy And His Golden Heart [time] => 2004-09-13 04:21:44 [hometext] => was listening to '3 Days Grace - I Hate Everything About You' and started thinking bout the lyrics and how they relate to some people i know but mostly one in particular...please comment!!! [bodytext] => Are you enjoying your life?
Missing the people you left behind?
Did you ever look back?
Wonder how we were?
Your silence answers my thoughts.

I remember when I first met you,
So shy and yet so outspoken.
You rang me that afternoon,
Wanting an answer I couldn't give.
I relented and said yes to you.

To say we were awkward is wrong,
I panicked every morning,
Wasn't sure what you'd expect in me.
The longest week in my life,
I've regretted you ever since.

Now six years have passed us by,
I still see you everyday.
You've changed so much since then,
So cocky and so arrogant.
Don't know the old you anymore.

Where did the boy I loved go?
Each day I fall more for you,
I know your bad but I can't stop.
Did you once feel this for me?
I fear you yet can't change how I am.

You walk with your fan club,
The girls that fawn over you.
Writing your name on their arms,
Branding them with your pen.
If commanded, do they bark for you?

I took the golden heart,
You gave me for my birthday.
Sleeping with it in my hands,
Yet I let go of it in my sleep,
A symbol of me losing your heart.

We kissed only awhile ago,
You breathed air back into me.
Then with you next actions,
Punctured me and I deflated.
I want to feel whole again.

I have to let you go,
I know I do eventually.
My heart still yearns for you,
For reasons I can't voice,
Let me out of your vice like grip.
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For The Guy And His Golden Heart

Contributed by unforgiven on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:21:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Are you enjoying your life?
Missing the people you left behind?
Did you ever look back?
Wonder how we were?
Your silence answers my thoughts.

I remember when I first met you,
So shy and yet so outspoken.
You rang me that afternoon,
Wanting an answer I couldn't give.
I relented and said yes to you.

To say we were awkward is wrong,
I panicked every morning,
Wasn't sure what you'd expect in me.
The longest week in my life,
I've regretted you ever since.

Now six years have passed us by,
I still see you everyday.
You've changed so much since then,
So cocky and so arrogant.
Don't know the old you anymore.

Where did the boy I loved go?
Each day I fall more for you,
I know your bad but I can't stop.
Did you once feel this for me?
I fear you yet can't change how I am.

You walk with your fan club,
The girls that fawn over you.
Writing your name on their arms,
Branding them with your pen.
If commanded, do they bark for you?

I took the golden heart,
You gave me for my birthday.
Sleeping with it in my hands,
Yet I let go of it in my sleep,
A symbol of me losing your heart.

We kissed only awhile ago,
You breathed air back into me.
Then with you next actions,
Punctured me and I deflated.
I want to feel whole again.

I have to let you go,
I know I do eventually.
My heart still yearns for you,
For reasons I can't voice,
Let me out of your vice like grip.

Copyright © unforgiven ... [ 2004-09-13 04:21:44]
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Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:34:38 AM AEST
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Sad but well written poem.
Greetz,
Hur

Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Delusions on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:27:19 AM AEST
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ooooh hunni i like this one alot!!! Suits the subject perfectly!!! keep it up!!! ~cRuNcHiE~

Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:02:56 AM AEST
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this is avery well expressed sad poem, look forward to reading more from you

pixie xx

Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:32:00 AM AEST
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Had to heave a long breath when I finished this one. What a sad story. Only someone who was there once can understand. Hang in there. I believe there is better ahead for you.
Stitch

Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by poetic_ire on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:42:31 AM AEST
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Hi. You offered and I accepted to read your poetry. Very good, btw.

At the end you said you want to feel whole again. No one, especially a cocky and arrogant boy will ever make you feel whole again. Only you can make yourself feel whole again. Only you can find your sense of self, to put your trust and hope into someone else to make you whole again will only disappoint you.

Very good write, btw. I can't wait to read the rest.

Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:25:46 AM AEST
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Hi. Well you wanated to know what I think of your poetry. I think it's good..different from mine...more straight forward..

My heart still yearns for you,
For reasons I can't voice,

Voice those reasons.. and your poem might have the dreamy quality that you liked in mine..but it was good anyway..just different.

Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:08:10 AM AEST
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great style and flow, even through your pain you have written a very beautifully heartfelt poem, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:15:31 AM AEST
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I can relate to certain parts of this very well
I like that you dont rhyme

Re: For The Guy And His Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:21:07 PM AEST
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i can relate to this and trust me things get better once you let go and move on.

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