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Array ( [sid] => 63668 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pushed me over the edge! [time] => 2004-09-14 01:31:17 [hometext] => please feel free too coment, i would like some help with my writtin.. :) thanx! [bodytext] => My hearts broken and crushed, there’s no feeling,
My wounds won’t heal; you’ve done your best,
You stole my heart and soul, my self confidence,
You took me, and broke my spirit, you’re obsessed!

I’m running away, I can’t take it any more,
Let me travel to other dimensions,
Where you can’t stalk me day and night,
I will disappear to where worlds darken!

A place where I’m happy, and pleased,
If that would ever exist, I think not, no,
Discredit me, demolish my brain, twist it,
Devastate my feelings, drive me to sorrow!

Shove me, taunt me, tease me, you’re pushing me closer,
You’re digging my grave deeper and deeper,
Just go and leave me alone, rip my heart apart,
You can almost see the crimson stain, as I grow weaker!

Look at me, look at what you’ve done this is your fault,
Watch me fall, watch me bleed, watch me leave this world,
Deteriorating into the earth from hence I came, it’s my time,
Isn’t this what you’ve always wanted, me gone and worthless!

A little late to be sorry now, because the damage is done,
My heart doesn’t exist; you backstabbed me to many times,
My last breath will soon come, and from your life I will fly,
Remember and regret what you did, remember our pastimes!
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Pushed me over the edge!

Contributed by bite_me on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:31:17 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



My hearts broken and crushed, there’s no feeling,
My wounds won’t heal; you’ve done your best,
You stole my heart and soul, my self confidence,
You took me, and broke my spirit, you’re obsessed!

I’m running away, I can’t take it any more,
Let me travel to other dimensions,
Where you can’t stalk me day and night,
I will disappear to where worlds darken!

A place where I’m happy, and pleased,
If that would ever exist, I think not, no,
Discredit me, demolish my brain, twist it,
Devastate my feelings, drive me to sorrow!

Shove me, taunt me, tease me, you’re pushing me closer,
You’re digging my grave deeper and deeper,
Just go and leave me alone, rip my heart apart,
You can almost see the crimson stain, as I grow weaker!

Look at me, look at what you’ve done this is your fault,
Watch me fall, watch me bleed, watch me leave this world,
Deteriorating into the earth from hence I came, it’s my time,
Isn’t this what you’ve always wanted, me gone and worthless!

A little late to be sorry now, because the damage is done,
My heart doesn’t exist; you backstabbed me to many times,
My last breath will soon come, and from your life I will fly,
Remember and regret what you did, remember our pastimes!




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Re: Pushed me over the edge! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:19:00 AM AEST
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Someone that could be capable of inflickting so much pain as u r in, I don't see how they would even care if u died.
don't do something to yourself because of this person as they must be heartless.
If u die then they will win!
Personally, to me no one that dishes out such stuff isn't worth me dieing for jus to hurt them cause there was someone else waiting in line for him and never gave me a second thought and we were married.
han tuff.
luv, huggs, understanding, faith hope, peace,
emy


Re: Pushed me over the edge! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:20:13 AM AEST
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One more thing, awesome writing!
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Pushed me over the edge! (User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:24:27 AM AEST
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good write, and the person[i completely forgot what the screen name was and im to lazy to hit the back button] is right about someone inflicting that much pain on someone isnt worth it. Been in those shoes, done it, it wasn't fun. So if your still in somewhat of that situation you should get yourself out because 95% of the time it only gets worse.
_x


Re: Pushed me over the edge! (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:58:41 AM AEST
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a truly magnificent write but please don't do anything foolish, especially if you think it would make him happy.




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