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Array ( [sid] => 63861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shoals [time] => 2004-09-15 16:25:40 [hometext] => weird day.. comments welcome [bodytext] => I woke this morning from taunting dream
From pictures I fear I’ll never see
Forsaking the moon’s last dying beam
Close my eyes; pray you’ll come back to me

I walked today with a prophet in the wood
Older than trees and wiser than men
He gave me difference of what will and what should
Closed his eyes; rolled off with the river again

I sleep tonight on a cushion of
Demons crawl free from under my bed
Thunder reminds me of the secrets you tell
Close our eyes; stare blind at the path ahead.
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Shoals

Contributed by luinil on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:25:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I woke this morning from taunting dream
From pictures I fear I’ll never see
Forsaking the moon’s last dying beam
Close my eyes; pray you’ll come back to me

I walked today with a prophet in the wood
Older than trees and wiser than men
He gave me difference of what will and what should
Closed his eyes; rolled off with the river again

I sleep tonight on a cushion of
Demons crawl free from under my bed
Thunder reminds me of the secrets you tell
Close our eyes; stare blind at the path ahead.

Copyright Â© luinil ... [ 2004-09-15 16:25:40]
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Re: Shoals (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:39:05 PM AEST
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i liked it. very good poem. you have talent. keep writing.

Re: Shoals (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:44:22 PM AEST
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sure does sound like a weird day =]

Re: Shoals (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:14:34 PM AEST
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This a remarkably dream and a coinsident that I woke from a demonic dream 'bout my ex but in the dream he could never get anything over on me.
Your style of writing is a very welcome exchange from the norm.
I luv the mysterious way u writ as u ver sully,
silently, drop your thinking when least expected. Very moving!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Shoals (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:02:51 AM AEST
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Full om imagetry
very good write

Sinned

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