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if you knew
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:29:53 PM in AEST
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if you knew the nights i pondered, wandered in my mind,
wondered where you resided, what you were doing,
how you felt, your heart would melt,
if ever you were aware, as by candlelight you wrote,
penning from heart to paper your songs,
i was right beside you all along,
when i sit and write, still i use that candlelight,
long creative hours into dark life nights,
same flame as always, a cozmic light,
heart looking over shoulder as you sat in your chair
typing into the universe, flicking your hair,
if ever you felt me, its true, i was there,
as i sat and wondered if you knew,
in a crystal mellow flare,
far away over there.
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Re: if you knew
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:37:13 PM AEST
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Aww hun this is beautiful, written perfectly and I love the picture. Maybe there are soul mates, who knows? Would the two in question even know when they met? *shrugs* I havent a clue lol
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:46:34 PM AEST
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Exquisite picture, music, words. I question if there is more than one true mate a lifetime? I certainly do hope so. Beautifully penned, Nessa.
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by Alovinmann on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:47:06 PM AEST
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I always felt your presence you never left me for a moment. When someone fills your heart the way you filled mine the term soul mate seems trite
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:47:51 PM AEST
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| warm thoughts and rushes of excitement.....the recognition that you know everything important about them.....instantly......kindred or not....soulmate or not.....it needn't matter......it's all good.....you write so eloquently girl.......i love the perspective in this one....:) |
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:35:51 PM AEST
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| Perfect as a snowflake...and as beautiful. |
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:53:54 PM AEST
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wow nessa this is so beautiful, and very moving,
takecare
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Re: if you knew
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by shelby on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:11:49 PM AEST
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Nessa
your heartsongs create the most beautiful music
Michelle |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:44:59 PM AEST
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candle light such a great setting for beautiful poetry. well done.
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Re: if you knew
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:10:03 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn, this is very precious and enchanting.. The music that goes along with it, meshes with the words, and masterfully creates a piece of true perfection... Undying love, reminsce, an unbearable yearning to be in the arms with the one you love... Ay me! My heart strings have been softly plucked, creating a sweet song... Incredibly beautiful, writ large across the Heavens, and shall be cherished by lovers all over the world... Mote it be. This will forever be etched in my fevered mind, teasing me, enchanting me, longing for my lover's blissful kiss... I thank you, for sharing this masterpiece once more, dearest ladyfawn... You are truly talented... Pen on, fellow poet. All my love! Your newest fan,
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Re: if you knew
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:48:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful as always.
--Mothy |
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by BrandySwanson on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:53:58 PM AEST
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aww ladyfawn this was so beautifully written very enjoyable read great job
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this. I have often wondered if soul mates really do exist. Thanks for the enlightenment.
Jeni |
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:31:33 PM AEST
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I'm sure he knows....*wink*
Beautiful write...
Jenni |
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by venkat on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:52:57 AM AEST
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Sat in a crystal mellow flare!!!..
awww.. this is very beautiful;..
best of luck. venkat |
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:10:13 AM AEST
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Wonderful and o so romantic... It sets my mind in candlelight!
Hugs,
Hur |
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by critterhideaway on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:14:07 AM AEST
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| Beautiful thoughts. I know thesr feelings very well. Thank you for this!! |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:16:48 AM AEST
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I would kill, well not really but you know what I mean, for one tenth of your poetic thoughts. How you consistantly come up with such ideas and ways of expression......leaves me breathless and a bit jealous :oP. beautiful ness
Roses
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:24:46 AM AEST
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How beautiful this is ladyfawn. I for one do believe in soul mates. :o)
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Re: if you knew
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by Bruce on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 12:31:05 PM AEST
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| more perfect it could not be |
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Re: if you knew
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 01:09:33 PM AEST
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Wonderful write~
really enjoyed it.
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Re: if you knew
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by Stitch on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:49:29 PM AEST
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The essence of that connection that makes you one another's muses. Beautiful.
Stitch |
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by Aquaelius on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 09:49:28 PM AEST
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| I think I started crying before the picture and words came up... I was soooo wrapped up in the music. Then *blam* the picture showed up and all the beautiful words that followed. I am humbled. |
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by bernard on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 11:24:07 AM AEST
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Ladyfawn we all have a soulmate somewhere on this earth of ours. Some find their soulmate others are sadly just left to dream about each other. Hugs from Bernard. |
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:32:03 PM AEST
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Nessa this is so enlightening for me. I've not given much thought to soulmates? Do we really have soulmates, or can we make......a soulmate? If you love someone enough, could they too feel like a soulmate. Such interesting questions you raise here.
This was a delight to read, question, and to see!
Your image reminded me of Romeo and Juliet.......young, romantic, and they felt very much in love!
So nice to spend the time reading your lovely poetry
hugs
consue |
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:48:47 AM AEST
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Woah Lady you have written such a touching poem, of love and music within the heart, a ryme that has left me awestruck..as you always do.
Beautifully written with such intense passion imbeded within each word.
Take care aways Ladyfawn |
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 02:50:19 AM AEST
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Truly a from the soul beautiful romantic write, quite an inspiration...I wish I could write like this
TY
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:12:36 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write & how you portray the picture in a most delighful way. Makes for great reading. Very lovely indeed.
Corinna |
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by Overstated on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:58:55 PM AEST
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| can't fault this ladyfawn - can't believe how powerful and strong this piece is!! so so good |
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:18:54 AM AEST
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Awesome writing ,my friend.
Great graphics and music.
luv, huggs,
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:19:12 AM AEST
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Awesome writing ,my friend.
Great graphics and music.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: if you knew
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by inoc on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:27:18 AM AEST
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....gentle and delicate
your words are beautiful
cheers! |
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:28:01 PM AEST
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Nothing but excellence and beauty.. from (if i may say so) one of the most talented poets here.
This is wonderful Nessa.
charlotte x_x_x |
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by Archie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 05:34:34 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem augmented by a very bueatiful song |
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:06:32 PM AEST
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| Nessa, what a beautifully written piece. My heart goes out to you my dear friend. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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by Lee on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:37:22 PM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:
With God's love and faith in Christ, one need
not be concerned with the concept of "soulmate", in my opinion.
Well-written rhymed verse, good imagery, and good , albiet a type-o, word imagery "cozmic".
Jolly Good Show! |
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by arden on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:52:55 PM AEST
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wow nessa....
this was so pretty, amazing, beautiful. and the list goes on and on.
i loved this write, it flowed so effortlessly. and the music and picture were a great addition.
loved this nes.
great work. 5 stars
Becky |
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by Adonia_Donata on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:46:17 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, my love, as truely wonderous as you heart. A wonderful write. |
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by Fwog on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:07:57 PM AEST
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How hauntingly beautiful, took my breath away.
You dear ladyfawn are a true wordsmith but even more than that you are so real.
Thank you for sharing this poignant write.
Hug and xoxoxo
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by Twisterchaser on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:49:51 PM AEST
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| How true if we only knew...beautiful words by a beautiful lady...the music to it is awesome.... |
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:32:23 AM AEST
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| You are a wonderful poet!! Thanks for shring this work of poetry. |
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:08:44 AM AEST
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A lovely gust of romantic affection.
You have conveyed a lovely warming picture. This is truly sentatioanl, what a remarkable piece of work.
Very much enjoyed by myself.
What else can I say, keep them coming.
Corinna |
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:08:20 AM AEST
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Wow, so touching and beautiful.
Spazzo |
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by Twisterchaser on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:23:58 AM AEST
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As always a beautiful touching write. The power of the pen desplaid in your hands.
Regards |
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:02:18 PM AEST
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| oh if only....fantastic poem. your first stanza was amazing and your last was brilliant. nice. |
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by WAE on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:17:54 PM AEST
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Amazingly sweet and penetrating... Engulfs the reader with romantic, slightly sad mist...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:23:50 PM AEST
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this is very beautiful, top job!
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by colinb on
Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 02:21:07 AM AEST
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| left a nice warmth in my heart |
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