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The day that he killed
Contributed by
nightrider
on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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a person screams,
a child cries,
a heartless man is taking lives,
another screams,
another dies,
a man with hurt, pain, and lies,
another dies,
another falls,
he's following me with his gun,
he starts to run,
then...
he falls,
the beast is gone,
the terror dead,
a gunshot ringing in my head,
the police came to save the day,
they came and took him away.
a mother sobs,
a father cries,
a single rose shows where they died.
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nightrider
... [
2002-11-08 17:00:00]
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Re: The day that he killed
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:08:26 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written
and very deep, full of emotion
I enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::��`�..� OreO�..���`::.
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Re: The day that he killed
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:10:03 AM AEST
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| What an imagination! But inspired you to a good poem! Christina |
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Re: The day that he killed
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by frozensuicide on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 08:25:36 AM AEST
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| ooooooooh this one has a beat, like a sonnet kinda but shorter in the thingies. i like this one, its reaaaallllly good! go go buffalo! |
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Re: The day that he killed
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by Yellowrose on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 11:00:04 AM AEST
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| What an EXCEPTIONAL writer you are. This is GREAT . {{{Hugs}}} Yellowrose. |
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Re: The day that he killed
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:41:57 AM AEST
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| This was so amazingly written.Great JOb. |
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Re: The day that he killed
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by Sandra on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 08:23:53 AM AEST
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| It has been a VERY long time since I have read something so wonderfully written. I LOVED it! Keep it up!! |
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Re: The day that he killed
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by bopeep on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 10:55:56 AM AEST
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| THis is really good. kinda represents in my opinion the darkness that kills a families love. but i don't really know, just how i interpreted it. very marvelous writing. keep it up! |
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Re: The day that he killed
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by bopeep on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 10:56:02 AM AEST
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| THis is really good. kinda represents in my opinion the darkness that kills a families love. but i don't really know, just how i interpreted it. very marvelous writing. keep it up! |
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