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I'm sad but only smile.
I scream but sit quietly.
I'm mad but only look down.
I smile but there's no happiness.
I'm scared but only stare.
I dream but do not sleep.
I'm alone but surrounded by people.
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My Hidden Feeling

Contributed by Elayner27 on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:50:40 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I cry but shed no tears.
I'm sad but only smile.
I scream but sit quietly.
I'm mad but only look down.
I smile but there's no happiness.
I'm scared but only stare.
I dream but do not sleep.
I'm alone but surrounded by people.
I love but there's no one here.

Copyright © Elayner27 ... [ 2004-09-17 17:50:40]
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Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 06:02:28 PM AEST
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deeply heartfelt write
Michelle

Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 06:48:33 PM AEST
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Too true.....

Jordan oxo

Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:01:05 PM AEST
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omg, beautiful, so true, so sad...

Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:26:05 PM AEST
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The sincerity of your
emotion is very clear in this
humble little poem.
Nice write.
--Mothy

Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:11:05 PM AEST
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I want to comment but...it's so good I don't know what to say. Sometimes I want to cry but I feel dry inside..it's like you say...I cry but I shed no tears So well put. Bravo!!!!

Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by amsy on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:26:35 PM AEST
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really good....reminds me of an allanise morrisettes song ..beutiful tho
-peace

Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:58:54 AM AEST
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My thought is that your poem depicts a very seperated and lonely state of being. Someone who is hiding behind a mask of complacency. Someone who needs to reach out for understanding and support.

A real heart felt sharing... glad you reached out

Willofree

Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 10:08:35 PM AEST
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Short, but very poignant.
Good write!

~Breezy

Re: My Hidden Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:50:05 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. I can totatly relate to it. If you ever want to talk, feel free to PM me.

Take care.

Scott

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