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A Wanted Change
Contributed by
sinful_misery
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:32:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Notations of conflict,
Interacting with sight,
Portraying true emotion,
Truly knowing, what is right.
Reflective mentalities,
Relentless charms of pain,
Branched away and distant,
Corrupted shame; what's the gain?
Corrective actions and duties,
Disillusioned; but still there,
Changing all to positive,
The question is; do we care?
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Re: A Wanted Change
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:41:23 PM AEST
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| thought provoking |
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Re: A Wanted Change
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:42:51 PM AEST
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| thought provoking |
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Re: A Wanted Change
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:51:50 PM AEST
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This is a great first read for the evening, I'm glad I had the pleasure of stumbling across it.
Keep writing |
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Re: A Wanted Change
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 12:15:56 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem, abit of a tongue twister and mind bender, excellent write. |
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