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Array ( [sid] => 64293 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Won't Let Me In [time] => 2004-09-19 00:04:37 [hometext] => I guess this is about how it feels to have a friend who is suicidal but won't let you help them. [bodytext] => She's so confused
She feels so used
And she doesn't want to hope anymore
Her heart's so depleted
And all she wants to do is die

And I know I see her
I know I need to be there
But she won't let anybody in

She's come so undone
And she just feels so wasted
Incomplete
She doesn't even bother with tears anymore
Her eyes are too bloodshot to cry
Her mind's too shot to scream for help

I know I should be there
I'm trying to help her
But I swear...
She doesn't know what to do
I'm trying but I'm not getting through
She doesn't want to live anymore
Doesn't want to love anymore
She's jammed up the door
She won't let anyone in [comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Won't Let Me In

Contributed by iluvpencils on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:04:37 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She's so confused
She feels so used
And she doesn't want to hope anymore
Her heart's so depleted
And all she wants to do is die

And I know I see her
I know I need to be there
But she won't let anybody in

She's come so undone
And she just feels so wasted
Incomplete
She doesn't even bother with tears anymore
Her eyes are too bloodshot to cry
Her mind's too shot to scream for help

I know I should be there
I'm trying to help her
But I swear...
She doesn't know what to do
I'm trying but I'm not getting through
She doesn't want to live anymore
Doesn't want to love anymore
She's jammed up the door
She won't let anyone in

Copyright © iluvpencils ... [ 2004-09-19 00:04:37]
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Re: Won't Let Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:16:30 AM AEST
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Beautiful write..
as much as you wish you could help your friend you cant help someone unless they are willing to recieve it... just let her know that you are there for her when she is ready.
-Chanti

Re: Won't Let Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:24:16 AM AEST
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one day at a time, one minute at a time, one breath at a time, and a whole lot of hugs and love, i hope your friend makes it through, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Won't Let Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:44:20 AM AEST
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this is awesome, its like me sumtimes

Re: Won't Let Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:48:18 AM AEST
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I can relate to this.
I have known friends that are suicidal.
And i know how hard it is.
But...you can only do so much, if they don't let you in, then you cannot help them any more than you are.
Don't give up, k?
Great write,
Phil xxx

Re: Won't Let Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:42:51 PM AEST
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man this is too true
and i can totally relate
but if they dont want help they wont take it and you cant change that believe me i tried
its the hardest position in the world
i know how you feel
Allways Sincere
Leana

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