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Isnt this going to be a funny poem?
I had a funny thought , if things were differ colors
It may make one laugh , instead of burting some bubbles
To see the grass all colored with blue
And the sky would be the color of shartrue
To go around and see polka dots , and mini stripes too
Would make one know they were on a adventure with no clue
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Far away land

Contributed by brew on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:26:40 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Roses are purple and daffadills are orange
Isnt this going to be a funny poem?
I had a funny thought , if things were differ colors
It may make one laugh , instead of burting some bubbles
To see the grass all colored with blue
And the sky would be the color of shartrue
To go around and see polka dots , and mini stripes too
Would make one know they were on a adventure with no clue

Copyright © brew ... [ 2004-09-20 15:26:40]
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Re: Far away land (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:33:29 PM AEST
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lol this is adorable
Michelle

Re: Far away land (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 04:08:59 PM AEST
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awesome idea, very creative*

Re: Far away land (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:12:11 PM AEST
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Hi there Brew, I agree with you.....I love colors galore......and I especially loved your polka dots.....as for everything else...........what a marvelous imagination!!!! Wouldn't it be great if we could color everything the color we liked best.....from our computer? Really neat I'd say.
It's been so nice reading your poetry again!
Keep up the good work Brew.......and of course you imagination too!
hugs
consue

Re: Far away land (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:56:54 PM AEST
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Light green skies, and blue grass........such a sight to see all I have to do is close my eyes......and smile, what a wonderful world.

Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing.

Chris

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