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Array ( [sid] => 64583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => let me live [time] => 2004-09-21 10:35:13 [hometext] => let me live dont tell me what i see and what you think is real,you cant see them but he's behind you...watch your back...and let me live [bodytext] => they say im crazy
that i see things in my head
but when i see a murder
blood spilt and children dead
i just want to see this vision further
and see what happens to the innocent
when the killer strikes
and the skin splits and eye balls held with spikes
i crave for more
i know im nasty
that the sight of blood brings a smile
but thats what makes me happy,for just a little while
when they get slit across the throat
and their stomachs punched they throw up so much blood
let them die
so i can watch
the only way to
is just to let me live...
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

let me live

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:35:13 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

they say im crazy
that i see things in my head
but when i see a murder
blood spilt and children dead
i just want to see this vision further
and see what happens to the innocent
when the killer strikes
and the skin splits and eye balls held with spikes
i crave for more
i know im nasty
that the sight of blood brings a smile
but thats what makes me happy,for just a little while
when they get slit across the throat
and their stomachs punched they throw up so much blood
let them die
so i can watch
the only way to
is just to let me live...

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-09-21 10:35:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: let me live (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:52:05 PM AEST
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Oh hannah this was so bloody and ghastly do you really meant it?
Dark Poetry just isn't my cup of tea.
Hugs
consue
Well written poem......but scares me.

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