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Array ( [sid] => 64613 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Realizations [time] => 2004-09-21 14:20:25 [hometext] => Simple lyrics about life and it's dream. No comments needed [bodytext] => Did you hear about the storm that came last night
leaving torment in it's wake it's frightful plight
All the people that it swept so far away
We wonder where they went to our dismay
Are we any different than those who came before
looking for the sunlight, yet life we do ignore

(Chorus)
I want to go to a place
where the people still greet each other
a place where friends
do not use and hurt one another

I keep on wading through the pain
learning once again
teaching by example
and lighting the life candle

When was the last time that you thought about some one
and made them better by the actions you have done
Do you remember what your mom and dad taught you
lessons that they hoped would guide your whole life through
Are we any different than those who came before
looking for a sign yet the lessons we ignore [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Realizations

Contributed by Archie on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:20:25 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Did you hear about the storm that came last night
leaving torment in it's wake it's frightful plight
All the people that it swept so far away
We wonder where they went to our dismay
Are we any different than those who came before
looking for the sunlight, yet life we do ignore

(Chorus)
I want to go to a place
where the people still greet each other
a place where friends
do not use and hurt one another

I keep on wading through the pain
learning once again
teaching by example
and lighting the life candle

When was the last time that you thought about some one
and made them better by the actions you have done
Do you remember what your mom and dad taught you
lessons that they hoped would guide your whole life through
Are we any different than those who came before
looking for a sign yet the lessons we ignore




Copyright © Archie ... [ 2004-09-21 14:20:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Realizations (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 03:08:19 PM AEST
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Well now archie, my friend,
a great write this deserves many comments so please, jus humor me a sec, please.
This one write that hits it straite out.
So many, not all, ignore there children, don't care where they are. I could go on but I want.
Great masterpeice!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Realizations (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:23:14 PM AEST
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well i thought this was true and amazing, ::ignores the fact comments werent needed:: =]


Re: Realizations (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:32:12 AM AEST
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Archie I agree totally wth your words.
A fantastic write makes one think to do more in helping others

Love Sweetangelukxxxx




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