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Array ( [sid] => 64868 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LAST WARNING. [time] => 2004-09-23 10:45:23 [hometext] => Hannah, Tara, Zoe, Chelsea, Samantha, Louise, Jasmine, Clare… There’s an endless list of names to who this poem is to. I just want to left ALONE! ‘Coz they started today, and quite frankly, I haven’t got the will power to KEEP MY COOL, any longer! [bodytext] => PlEaSa CoMmEnT oN My PoEm!

You’re stirred it,
All up again!
Just leave me ALONE.
JUST GET OUT OF MY HEAD!

You couldn’t imagine how much it hurt,
When I thought he was DEAD.
So just leave me alone!
BEFORE I PUNCH IN YOUR HEADS!!!

I’ve had it with you!
2 of you carried knives.
What’s wrong with you Zoe?
They could have taken your life!

So go back to them then.
‘Coz I won’t let you rule me!
Why?
Because I’m NOT a sheep!
Why?
‘Coz I don’t wanna be a DRUGGY!

Call me what you like.
They’re only words!
I’m already damaged.
I’m already hurt!

But take THIS as you like,
I’M SICK OF YOU LITTLE SLUTS!
So this is your final and last warning,
‘COZ I’VE ***** HAD ENOUGH!
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LAST WARNING.

Contributed by deathdrop on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:45:23 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

PlEaSa CoMmEnT oN My PoEm!

You’re stirred it,
All up again!
Just leave me ALONE.
JUST GET OUT OF MY HEAD!

You couldn’t imagine how much it hurt,
When I thought he was DEAD.
So just leave me alone!
BEFORE I PUNCH IN YOUR HEADS!!!

I’ve had it with you!
2 of you carried knives.
What’s wrong with you Zoe?
They could have taken your life!

So go back to them then.
‘Coz I won’t let you rule me!
Why?
Because I’m NOT a sheep!
Why?
‘Coz I don’t wanna be a DRUGGY!

Call me what you like.
They’re only words!
I’m already damaged.
I’m already hurt!

But take THIS as you like,
I’M SICK OF YOU LITTLE SLUTS!
So this is your final and last warning,
‘COZ I’VE ***** HAD ENOUGH!

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-09-23 10:45:23]
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Re: LAST WARNING. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:54:15 AM AEST
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angery words, that made a good write, honest and straight talking, I like it *hugs*

pixie xx

Re: LAST WARNING. (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 11:26:02 AM AEST
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im glad that you posted that i feel like that sometimes bravo strong write!ps i hope im not on your list i just hate people getting down on theirselves so hard peace and love!

Re: LAST WARNING. (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_girl121 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:26:24 PM AEST
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hey i liked this one alot, sometimes when u just tell people to puck off they listen... hopefully this girls do.

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