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you can hear the dragging of his feet.

He comes from the pits of Hell
what will he do next? No one can tell.

He goes to the graveyard late at night
into the darkness, out of sight.

The ghoul senses fresh meat
he sees an open grave and has a seat.

Owls in tree tops are watching him
the streetlights start growing dim.

He sits and tears the corpse apart
the ghoul starts eating the still bloody heart.

The corpse just put into the grave
the ghoul gets his fill, heads back to his cave.

He awaits for another night to begin
so he can sit and eat a freshly buried corpse again.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Sept.17/2004

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The Ghoul

Contributed by Cynthia on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:00:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He limps down the street
you can hear the dragging of his feet.

He comes from the pits of Hell
what will he do next? No one can tell.

He goes to the graveyard late at night
into the darkness, out of sight.

The ghoul senses fresh meat
he sees an open grave and has a seat.

Owls in tree tops are watching him
the streetlights start growing dim.

He sits and tears the corpse apart
the ghoul starts eating the still bloody heart.

The corpse just put into the grave
the ghoul gets his fill, heads back to his cave.

He awaits for another night to begin
so he can sit and eat a freshly buried corpse again.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Sept.17/2004

Copyright © Cynthia ... [ 2004-09-23 18:00:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Ghoul (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:11:33 PM AEST
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*shiiiivers* Ooooh, creepy . . . deliciously dark and vivid. Awesome job, I really liked this one.

your friend,
Nora

Re: The Ghoul (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:59:56 PM AEST
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Yet another great poem by one of the best I've met. You are so talented and I really admire your awesome style. Great Job. Your Friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

Re: The Ghoul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:34:48 PM AEST
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it's so cool!

Re: The Ghoul (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:13:32 PM AEST
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very dark and creepy write loved it

Brandy

Re: The Ghoul (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:26:41 PM AEST
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ewwwwwww.............

very dark and haunting, hugs n' love nessa

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