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Am I crazy?
For always having my dady on my mind?
Am I crazy for missing my brother?
It hurts so much God. Please help me.
I miss my dad more than anything
My mom wont talk about it with me
I know he watches over us kids,
but I still wish I could have said..Goodbye.
Am I crazy for believing in what I do?
Am I crazy for doing what I do?
People think I am.
Call me fat, call me dumb.
Am I?...Self aggression hurts like hell.
No one knows what its like to be hurt like this,
My dad died of AIDS, now my brother has AIDS.
Im not trying to have people have pitty on me like Holly,
All I want...is help
All I want..is my daddy back
So please help me God...Help before I become "Crazy".
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Dear God...

Contributed by Britty on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 01:46:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dear God,
Am I crazy?
For always having my dady on my mind?
Am I crazy for missing my brother?
It hurts so much God. Please help me.
I miss my dad more than anything
My mom wont talk about it with me
I know he watches over us kids,
but I still wish I could have said..Goodbye.
Am I crazy for believing in what I do?
Am I crazy for doing what I do?
People think I am.
Call me fat, call me dumb.
Am I?...Self aggression hurts like hell.
No one knows what its like to be hurt like this,
My dad died of AIDS, now my brother has AIDS.
Im not trying to have people have pitty on me like Holly,
All I want...is help
All I want..is my daddy back
So please help me God...Help before I become "Crazy".

Copyright © Britty ... [ 2004-09-24 13:46:51]
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Re: Dear God... (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:08:16 PM AEST
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Well, Britty; you've gone to the only one who can give you relief and understanding. Pain and sorrow came as a result of man's sin, yet God has a purpose in everything - you can see it in the terrible suffering of the saints of old: Job, Lazerus, etc. and we all must suffer in this life. But, it (this life) is like the twinkling of an eye compared to eternity in paradise. I hope this helps. God Bless

Re: Dear God... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:04:40 PM AEST
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no you arent crazy, and dont listen to other peoples worthless opinions. thats all they are, worthless. well considering my beliefs i cant say god will do anything for you, its all up to you.

Re: Dear God... (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:51:34 AM AEST
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Im so sorry for your loss. And no your not crazy. You just miss them. My husband has aids and every day Im so afraid of losing him.
BRIGHTEST OF BLESSINGS TO YOU!
MaDonna

Re: Dear God... (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:10:54 AM AEST
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Britty, so many answers I wish I could give you, so much hurt in your life, I have none. All that I can say is this, God made you EXACTLY as you are, you are made exactly how he wants you to be, and in His eyes He made no mistake.

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