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Array ( [sid] => 65012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What's going on?? [time] => 2004-09-24 14:14:04 [hometext] => This is about losing everything in one night [bodytext] => What's going on?
Everything's destroyed
Family
Friends
And even relationships
All gone...
In the midst of one night
It all seemed to slowly part its way
By morning the sun never rose
A shadow had crept its way across the land
Sucking the youth from all living beings
Dying of age
Lonely and unspoken for... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 43 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

What's going on??

Contributed by pyrofungus on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 02:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

What's going on?
Everything's destroyed
Family
Friends
And even relationships
All gone...
In the midst of one night
It all seemed to slowly part its way
By morning the sun never rose
A shadow had crept its way across the land
Sucking the youth from all living beings
Dying of age
Lonely and unspoken for...

Copyright © pyrofungus ... [ 2004-09-24 14:14:04]
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Re: What's going on?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 03:53:21 PM AEST
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Indeed - What's going on? Very depressing. - End of the world? Oh, end of your world. Begin another. God Bless

Re: What's going on?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:57:44 PM AEST
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powerful.

Re: What's going on?? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 02:58:32 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: What's going on?? (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:47:21 PM AEST
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short but to the point...it's overwhelming how fast life changes...sorry for your losses and your pain i hope your days have looked better.

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