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Array ( [sid] => 65033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Discriminating Mask [time] => 2004-09-24 19:10:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The needle popped through his thick flesh
Droplets of sullen blood trickled down his cheeks
Thick, brown leather straps are being sewn onto his face
If you segregate inhumanly, you will be punished on hellish terms

Those lined up shall be blinded by boiling mercury
Their retinas scarred by their malicious judgment
Blinded in hell you will be,
Forever running around on scorching fire

As the mercury is poured,
Shrill banshee-like screams reverberate off the walls,
Emitting from foul mouths

I look in disgust & shame,
As creations of life are being lost to this rightful punishment

Those who shun people of different race, color or gender
Are in my own hell [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Crimson_Rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Discriminating Mask

Contributed by Crimson_Rose on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:10:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The needle popped through his thick flesh
Droplets of sullen blood trickled down his cheeks
Thick, brown leather straps are being sewn onto his face
If you segregate inhumanly, you will be punished on hellish terms

Those lined up shall be blinded by boiling mercury
Their retinas scarred by their malicious judgment
Blinded in hell you will be,
Forever running around on scorching fire

As the mercury is poured,
Shrill banshee-like screams reverberate off the walls,
Emitting from foul mouths

I look in disgust & shame,
As creations of life are being lost to this rightful punishment

Those who shun people of different race, color or gender
Are in my own hell

Copyright © Crimson_Rose ... [ 2004-09-24 19:10:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Discriminating Mask (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:33:52 PM AEST
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angry and intriguing write.

Re: Discriminating Mask (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:38:56 PM AEST
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This is amazing. It was the most angry poem I have read for a long time. I don't think there is any room for discrimination, I'm so tired of people being seperated from "normal" people because of gender, race, disorders, or whatever. I really like your poem.
Katie

Re: Discriminating Mask (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:32:38 PM AEST
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Freaky and graphic wirte, like it though reminded me of myself when anger is showing thorugh, cheers for sharing such a vivid talent.

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