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Array ( [sid] => 65054 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tears in My Eyes [time] => 2004-09-24 21:57:52 [hometext] => With Nothing to Say, I Leave You to Read. [bodytext] => Tears in My Eyes

I look back and see
All the memories
So self concious
Of what was thought of me
Unsure of myself constantly
And it got me nowhere
Except here
And here I am in nowhere
Still with this fear

I wonder now
If what I did
Was for the best
Way back then

I still hate the way
People affect me
I can never let go
When I'm supposed to
Prolonging the pain
That kills me inside
Till I can't hold on
And I let go
With tears in my eyes [comments] => 9 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Tears in My Eyes

Contributed by Essentially9 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:57:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tears in My Eyes

I look back and see
All the memories
So self concious
Of what was thought of me
Unsure of myself constantly
And it got me nowhere
Except here
And here I am in nowhere
Still with this fear

I wonder now
If what I did
Was for the best
Way back then

I still hate the way
People affect me
I can never let go
When I'm supposed to
Prolonging the pain
That kills me inside
Till I can't hold on
And I let go
With tears in my eyes

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-09-24 21:57:52]
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Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:11:22 PM AEST
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wow...incredible...!

Summer

Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Nicole_Rahaman on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:33:26 PM AEST
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Very moving. Thank you for sharing this.

Nicole

Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:55:41 PM AEST
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A beautiful yet emotional write, and so painful to read, like i was there seeing akll the hurt you are feeling, I hope you find the solace needed to heal the pain and anguish you feel within your heart.
Take care always and forever

Karl

Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:56:05 AM AEST
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a well written poem
thanks for submitting
can feel the pain
cheers!

Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:27:42 PM AEST
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like i've always said you have to seek comfort and peace within yourself and dissasociate yourself from those that only bring you down. you're you and there's nothing else you can do but be true to yourself. this was an awesome poem tho and i hope that your days look up. you have great talent!

Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:10:25 PM AEST
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Awesome poem.

Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:59:38 AM AEST
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This is a very true and honest poem. You have shared your heart well. Things get better when we see them in perspective

Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:35:17 PM AEST
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Another power packed write.
Blu

Re: Tears in My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:46:45 PM AEST
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This write has a lot of honesty to it. I can't let go of the past either. It's hurtful. I share your pain. I hope things look up for you. *S* Cynthia

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