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Trapped under the weight of my own love, never to breathe easy. I will slowly begin to fade until I am no more.

I can't see out, locked inside this 'freaking' box till the time comes that I will rot away. But I still know you're looking for me, waiting for me to love you again. You love to see me cry.

I won't let you hurt me again, so I will lock myself in. I will close the doors and seal this tomb. And you'll remember the way you made me feel. I can only hope you cry half the tears I bathed you in. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 48 [informant] => AndTheFoolShallBurn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Secret Cellar

Contributed by AndTheFoolShallBurn on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:45:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

No one will get in, because I will close the doors and seal myself inside this tomb. The saddest part is that no one will miss me or even know I'm gone. After it's all said and done, I will not even care if my heart decides to stop. It's all a fraud.

Trapped under the weight of my own love, never to breathe easy. I will slowly begin to fade until I am no more.

I can't see out, locked inside this 'freaking' box till the time comes that I will rot away. But I still know you're looking for me, waiting for me to love you again. You love to see me cry.

I won't let you hurt me again, so I will lock myself in. I will close the doors and seal this tomb. And you'll remember the way you made me feel. I can only hope you cry half the tears I bathed you in.

Copyright © AndTheFoolShallBurn ... [ 2004-09-26 20:45:07]
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Re: My Secret Cellar (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:02:30 PM AEST
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brilliant lyrics.

Re: My Secret Cellar (User Rating: 1 )
by megan on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:10:01 PM AEST
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wish i could here that song that went along with it. also i know exactly how you feel some time

Re: My Secret Cellar (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:18:00 PM AEST
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Wonderfully imaginative title!

Well-written free verse, with a distinct poetic voice.

Jolly good show!

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