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My Blood Moon
Contributed by
SuicideParty
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:09:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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If I learn to laugh in time to cry
Will you bid me live in time to die?
Could I hold my fragility in such great esteem
That such delicacy in character my deeds may redeem?
If I thrive to stagger away from contempt
Could I trust youd assure from my shame Im exempt?
Should I look to the past to repent for my sins?
Or to God when youve fallen as your glory descends?
Could I mimic the stars and lay siege to the skies?
Should I veil my emotion with cynical eyes?
Introspective deliverance from who will you wrought?
When whimsical remembrance was all that you sought?
I have nothing to gain, and so nothing to prove
I have nothing to give, and so nothing to lose.
And when all that Ive broken begins my demise
In the end youll get nothing but mirrors and lies.
Copyright ©
SuicideParty
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2004-09-26 22:09:30]
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Re: My Blood Moon
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:15:20 PM AEST
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| excellent poem. |
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Re: My Blood Moon
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:20:09 PM AEST
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| wow that was astonising..very well ritten poem probly one of the best ive read |
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Re: My Blood Moon
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:43:14 PM AEST
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| AWESOME! i love it |
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Re: My Blood Moon
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by waos on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:15:39 PM AEST
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| well i thought that was really good, i don't understand it all but i liked the set up and word choice... keep it up |
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Re: My Blood Moon
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:59:49 AM AEST
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| This poem, caught and held my eyes beginning to end, It shows the struugle you face, In words I was able to associate with, could feel the pain I hope you find the release you wish for and the healing you want. Thanks for sharing such a strong write. |
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Re: My Blood Moon
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by candysears on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:22:35 PM AEST
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Love your poem
Very Good.
candysears
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