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My First Kiss...Give Me A Helmet
Contributed by
free2you
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:51:46 PM in AEST
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It was in the shadows
that we first kissed
the shadows
of Disneylands submarine.
To me it looked real.
Fish swimming underwater,
treasure chests ..treasure.
I didn't feel the crowd around me.
I was fifteen and it was my
first trip to D-land
and
my first real kiss
and
my first real love.
what was it that took my breath away?
the kiss...or the crowd...or...
looking up
and seeing trash
floating on the water?
someone give me
a crash helmet
for THAT landing!
Mr. Disney, you could
have thought further ahead
in case someone looked up.
I did. The sub ride isn't there now.
Neither is Walt Disney.
those innocent days are gone, too.
But...trash is still here!
free2you2004
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free2you
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Re: My First Kiss...Give Me A Helmet
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:17:07 PM AEST
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| lmao. i was going to make a comment about the trash, but it would have been seen as off color... |
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Re: My First Kiss...Give Me A Helmet
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:53:42 PM AEST
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| hehehehe *rolls around on floor* I thought this was great. *S* Cynthia |
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