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Array ( [sid] => 65462 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my one shot [time] => 2004-09-28 16:41:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => so here it goes my one chance to let the world know how i feel,
just liek that a simple sentence simple line,
simple paragraph of thoughts intertwined.
lettign out the words pouring out my heart,
lettign the world see for once what its like to be me.
im not perfect nor do i ever wish to be.
yet im still not happy being me..
i liek who i am yet im still not happy.
cant move passed this dark phase.. of teenage angst n insecureties..
so i let u in.. push u out...
force myself to live with out..
a friend who gets me all of me..
n sees passed the mask n sees me for me..
someone who understands why sumtimes i need to hide..
locked away deep inside my mind..
my emotions no one will ever find.. i
m stuck inside a shadow ive created..
an illusion.. faked smiles growing old ..
wondering if anyone else notices that sad eyes tend to lie..
make u think everythign is perfect but thats from far away
bc up close a smile is just a mask hiding all the pain..
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my one shot

Contributed by xsadxeyesxtendxtoxliex on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 04:41:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

so here it goes my one chance to let the world know how i feel,
just liek that a simple sentence simple line,
simple paragraph of thoughts intertwined.
lettign out the words pouring out my heart,
lettign the world see for once what its like to be me.
im not perfect nor do i ever wish to be.
yet im still not happy being me..
i liek who i am yet im still not happy.
cant move passed this dark phase.. of teenage angst n insecureties..
so i let u in.. push u out...
force myself to live with out..
a friend who gets me all of me..
n sees passed the mask n sees me for me..
someone who understands why sumtimes i need to hide..
locked away deep inside my mind..
my emotions no one will ever find.. i
m stuck inside a shadow ive created..
an illusion.. faked smiles growing old ..
wondering if anyone else notices that sad eyes tend to lie..
make u think everythign is perfect but thats from far away
bc up close a smile is just a mask hiding all the pain..

Copyright © xsadxeyesxtendxtoxliex ... [ 2004-09-28 16:41:31]
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Re: my one shot (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 04:54:18 PM AEST
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excellent write with a powerful ending.

"wondering if anyone else notices that sad eyes tend to lie..
make u think everythign is perfect but thats from far away
bc up close a smile is just a mask hiding all the pain.. " i thought that was very nice.

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