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Array ( [sid] => 6547 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Blanket of Love [time] => 2002-11-11 21:00:00 [hometext] => This is about Baptism [bodytext] => Your heart is racing,
Your breath comes short,
Your hand are shaking,
And the tears wont stop.

But when you step into the water,
It's like it was meant to be,
The joy that you feel,
You can't even explain.

And when you go under the water,
Is when you feel the lord the most,
It's like a blanket of love,
Just fell upon you suddenly.

And all the happiness that is in that room,
You share with your family and friends,
And all the joy that is in your heart,
Is like nothing you have ever experienced...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 11 [informant] => KShink [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )
Blanket of Love

Contributed by KShink on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



Your heart is racing,
Your breath comes short,
Your hand are shaking,
And the tears wont stop.

But when you step into the water,
It's like it was meant to be,
The joy that you feel,
You can't even explain.

And when you go under the water,
Is when you feel the lord the most,
It's like a blanket of love,
Just fell upon you suddenly.

And all the happiness that is in that room,
You share with your family and friends,
And all the joy that is in your heart,
Is like nothing you have ever experienced...




Copyright © KShink ... [ 2002-11-11 21:00:00]
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Re: Blanket of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 01:54:32 PM AEST
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I like how yoyu made this feel like a blanket,I felt like God gave me a hug! Good write!
And Congratulations!Christina


Re: Blanket of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 01:12:08 AM AEST
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Dear KShink @-<-<<
what a beautiful feeling you were given, may it be with you for all your life long... and really nice poem:)
Your writing friend always Nessa




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