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Array ( [sid] => 65790 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How can I love when its taken from me [time] => 2004-10-01 16:01:17 [hometext] => Lost and confused [bodytext] => Here I sit.,all lost and confused
The one who told , I guess they used
They told ,so mush one was to beleive
But, then it was gone , and no one to retrieve

They come and said
They needed so much
I gave and gave, and did not require, such

To the one I put in my whole hearted soul
Gave me not, one but all to be untold

What do you do?! When you are loved in a sense
But to give and give, and then make a repense

You ask, your heart thats true
Why did, this one make me so blue?

I want this one so bad, it tears me apart
And the one, Did take the heart

Why does love hurt one so much
No one knows the unloving touch

I love and want that it hurts so much.....but why give , what is not in touch?! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 20 [informant] => silentshadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )

How can I love when its taken from me

Contributed by silentshadow on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:01:17 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

Here I sit.,all lost and confused
The one who told , I guess they used
They told ,so mush one was to beleive
But, then it was gone , and no one to retrieve

They come and said
They needed so much
I gave and gave, and did not require, such

To the one I put in my whole hearted soul
Gave me not, one but all to be untold

What do you do?! When you are loved in a sense
But to give and give, and then make a repense

You ask, your heart thats true
Why did, this one make me so blue?

I want this one so bad, it tears me apart
And the one, Did take the heart

Why does love hurt one so much
No one knows the unloving touch

I love and want that it hurts so much.....but why give , what is not in touch?!

Copyright © silentshadow ... [ 2004-10-01 16:01:17]
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Re: How can I love when its taken from me (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:40:45 PM AEST
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thats a pretty poem. it flows really well :)

Re: How can I love when its taken from me (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 05:27:30 PM AEST
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What you write about
seems to happen to us all.

People are bad,
but you have to try to believe in love.

It ain't easy.
But what else you gonna do.

I like this, I hope more will read it.
--mothy

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