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Array ( [sid] => 66139 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Its all your fault [time] => 2004-10-04 23:29:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I lay in bed, I think of you
Its all your fault, thats why i'm like this
With only one eye, I look at the wall
I'm bleeding to death
And you were the one who did this to me
You destroyed me and tried to kill me
I look at the blood on my bed
With only one arm and hand
I use my blood to write Its all fault on the wall over and over again
I hear a sound in my room
I turn around, but found nothing
Then...*BANG*
I lay one the ground nearly dead
And I hear you laughing at me
That was the last thing I saw, your your face with a smirk on it, laughing at me [comments] => 1 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 13 [informant] => the_fallen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Its all your fault

Contributed by the_fallen on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:29:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As I lay in bed, I think of you
Its all your fault, thats why i'm like this
With only one eye, I look at the wall
I'm bleeding to death
And you were the one who did this to me
You destroyed me and tried to kill me
I look at the blood on my bed
With only one arm and hand
I use my blood to write Its all fault on the wall over and over again
I hear a sound in my room
I turn around, but found nothing
Then...*BANG*
I lay one the ground nearly dead
And I hear you laughing at me
That was the last thing I saw, your your face with a smirk on it, laughing at me

Copyright © the_fallen ... [ 2004-10-04 23:29:15]
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Re: Its all your fault (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:58:15 AM AEST
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No one should suffer this faith sorry 4 your pain . . .

((((4 U)))) Dorian : (

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