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Array ( [sid] => 66240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Help me [time] => 2004-10-05 18:00:07 [hometext] => This was one of my first poems...I wrote it to kinda let my parenta know that i need help [bodytext] => The person that i seem to be
is'nt really who i am
who you see is fake
cuzz i cover all i can.
So you don't really know me
or the ways i feel inside
and you don't understand me
cuzz theres so much that i hide.
You'll never know the pain i feel
the horrors deep within
all of my past memories
are eating thru my skin.
I can feel the madness growing
from old obsessions you call sins
and i've never let you see that
i've worn a mask instead.
Someone needs to know my problems
ARE MESSING UP MY HEAD.
I need some where to run to
a place to go and cry
but there is nowhere to run to
no place safe to hide.
There's too much on my mind
i need someone to understand
i need someone to confide in
when i'm scared, alone and sad...
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Se1f-Destruct [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Help me

Contributed by Se1f-Destruct on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:00:07 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



The person that i seem to be
is'nt really who i am
who you see is fake
cuzz i cover all i can.
So you don't really know me
or the ways i feel inside
and you don't understand me
cuzz theres so much that i hide.
You'll never know the pain i feel
the horrors deep within
all of my past memories
are eating thru my skin.
I can feel the madness growing
from old obsessions you call sins
and i've never let you see that
i've worn a mask instead.
Someone needs to know my problems
ARE MESSING UP MY HEAD.
I need some where to run to
a place to go and cry
but there is nowhere to run to
no place safe to hide.
There's too much on my mind
i need someone to understand
i need someone to confide in
when i'm scared, alone and sad...




Copyright © Se1f-Destruct ... [ 2004-10-05 18:00:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Help me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:13:33 PM AEST
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brilliant write. quite amazing, emotional, powerful, and intriguing. nice rhyme and rhythym.

well i hope this poem got you the help you wanted in the end. if this is one of your first poems, than you have much talent, and i hope you use it well. =]


Re: Help me (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:16:13 PM AEST
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wow very powerful and emotional stuff you wrote here. i like how you became more pronounced in your problems at the end and ended it with a touch of sadness, great job! keep on writing!


Re: Help me (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:17:51 PM AEST
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You're SO brave for telling your parents. Good luck with everything. Let me know if I can ever help you, I can relate to the feelings.
Katie


Re: Help me (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:21:09 PM AEST
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o gud luck! it might seem hard 2 tell ur parents, i spent years working up the courage, but when i did it was worth it, as im sure it will be for you


Re: Help me (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 04:53:27 PM AEST
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That was very good
even if you did use 'cuzz' instead of because
5 out of 5

If you have the time, could you take a look at my poems, and tell me what you think


Re: Help me (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:59:08 PM AEST
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i know jut how you feel...
i've been in your shoes too often...!




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