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Array ( [sid] => 66316 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Hate For You [time] => 2004-10-06 11:01:18 [hometext] => I just needed to get this off my chest, better out then in so they say.... [bodytext] => My sheer & utter hate for you,
Lives in my heart that is true,
You have sat pretty for far too long,
Now it’s time to put you where you belong.

Down in the gutter that’s far too good,
How I long to shed some of your blood,
You deserve to suffer severely,
To my heart I hold your demise dearly.

You have no heart, but a swinging brick,
People like you really make me sick,
You think the world owes you a living,
But what exactly to the world are you giving?

Nothing at all but lies & bull*****,
To breathe the same air I don’t see you fit,
I will laugh as I watch you fall,
It is now us who have control of the ball.

You hide behind everyone & everything,
Onto your bitterness you still cling,
Open your eyes & use your brain,
It is you who is driving you insane.

You lay the blame at our door,
You shouldn’t have acted like a whore,
You had the love of a good man,
But you let him slip through your hands.

You ***** on him & treated him bad,
He is the best bloke I’ve ever had,
I know what real love is & here we are,
Being a total ***** didn’t get you very far.


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My Hate For You

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:01:18 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



My sheer & utter hate for you,
Lives in my heart that is true,
You have sat pretty for far too long,
Now it’s time to put you where you belong.

Down in the gutter that’s far too good,
How I long to shed some of your blood,
You deserve to suffer severely,
To my heart I hold your demise dearly.

You have no heart, but a swinging brick,
People like you really make me sick,
You think the world owes you a living,
But what exactly to the world are you giving?

Nothing at all but lies & bull*****,
To breathe the same air I don’t see you fit,
I will laugh as I watch you fall,
It is now us who have control of the ball.

You hide behind everyone & everything,
Onto your bitterness you still cling,
Open your eyes & use your brain,
It is you who is driving you insane.

You lay the blame at our door,
You shouldn’t have acted like a whore,
You had the love of a good man,
But you let him slip through your hands.

You ***** on him & treated him bad,
He is the best bloke I’ve ever had,
I know what real love is & here we are,
Being a total ***** didn’t get you very far.






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Re: My Hate For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:05:46 AM AEST
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Wow, seems like you really hate this person lol. Great write.


Re: My Hate For You (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:31:23 AM AEST
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Very nice display of emotions :)


Re: My Hate For You (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:53:51 AM AEST
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Very confronting write! You really show your hate for this particular person with such fierce passion. Love your work Pixie, keep it up!


Re: My Hate For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 03:18:13 PM AEST
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Hell Hath no Fury, tell like it is pixie, ((((4 u))))

Dorian : )


Re: My Hate For You (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 11:40:05 PM AEST
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I like your poem but it is not your style...
You write poems about love and to see you write about hate is so unimaginable.
By the way- are these reflections that you see?
I hope not as no one should think this way about their own self...
Joe


Re: My Hate For You (User Rating: 1 )
by runaway0516 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:17:36 AM AEST
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this is a great poem and i can relate and it has a good flow...good things good things...




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