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Array ( [sid] => 6633 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => What You Don't See [time] => 2002-11-13 19:30:00 [hometext] => Sometimes the one who causes you the most pain can also be your best friend. [bodytext] => Broken and scattered were the pieces of my heart,
It’s beating rhythm halted, it’s was torn all apart.
Wounded to the core my soul began to weep,
And I prayed for endless silence within eternal sleep.
But patiently you pulled me from this darkness that’s within,
And showed me life’s not over, your spirit entered in.
With love you did not know you gave, my hope slowly returned,
And dried up all the tears of doubt because you were concerned.

I am the one who caused me pain, though I laid it at your feet,
Still you took it all in graceful style, so gentle and discreet.
You helped me realize the truth I should have seen before,
And in friendship gave me what I need to open a new door.
In awe I am of all you do and the choices that you make,
Like a precious jewel seldom seen, impossible to fake.
So let me share what you don’t see, this truth I will impart,
You are the most amazing friend and always in my heart.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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What You Don't See

Contributed by wordpoet on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Broken and scattered were the pieces of my heart,
It’s beating rhythm halted, it’s was torn all apart.
Wounded to the core my soul began to weep,
And I prayed for endless silence within eternal sleep.
But patiently you pulled me from this darkness that’s within,
And showed me life’s not over, your spirit entered in.
With love you did not know you gave, my hope slowly returned,
And dried up all the tears of doubt because you were concerned.

I am the one who caused me pain, though I laid it at your feet,
Still you took it all in graceful style, so gentle and discreet.
You helped me realize the truth I should have seen before,
And in friendship gave me what I need to open a new door.
In awe I am of all you do and the choices that you make,
Like a precious jewel seldom seen, impossible to fake.
So let me share what you don’t see, this truth I will impart,
You are the most amazing friend and always in my heart.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com




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Re: What You Don't See (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:51:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem Doug.


Re: What You Don't See (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 09:18:36 PM AEST
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Such a lovely poem ... beautiful words.


Re: What You Don't See (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 04:41:37 AM AEST
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great write Doug, goes straight to ones heart, glad your back


Re: What You Don't See (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:52:55 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful and heartfelt
This really touched me, you truly
have a way with words, Thanks
for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: What You Don't See (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:53:44 PM AEST
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Sometimes???????? *smile*
Your words brought a smile to my face after a long, miserable day......
I can never do that - write a poem that isn't completely heart breaking in tone. I am challenged to do so now.
Good write! Thanks for sharing!



Re: What You Don't See (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:33:51 PM AEST
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a really great poem - you convey such depth of emotion without being over the top. keep writing xxx


Re: What You Don't See (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 04:51:40 AM AEST
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Such perfect flow and rythm!! And with such emotion,,,Great write!


Re: What You Don't See (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 09:59:18 PM AEST
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Aww that was just beautiful and very full of emotion. It also was very sweet.




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