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Array ( [sid] => 6638 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Cant change this weather [time] => 2002-11-13 22:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If I had known
that this cloud would turn into a cyclone
I duck and dive
move to the side and try to hide
from you or me I just freeze when I see
no safety now calling now crawling draining me

is the circumstance that im delt
its hard to get your head strait
and its hard to relate
to you or me I just freeze when I see
no exits cant backdown cant walk away here me as I say

you come and get up my hopes
than smash them down no way to cope
and I react to it like a surprise
maybe should open my eyes
shouldve seen it
shouldve known better
and its getting worse
cant change this weather

ya you know me
hey and you told me
and I feel so real
and I drift away as your eyes wonder

and now Im lost not to find
think that I am past my time
and I shouldve known
and I shouldve known
that I could never be happy
in this world that drags me down
and Im feeling really crappy
evertime that you come around

you come and get up my hopes
than smash them down no way to cope
and I react to it like a surprise
maybe should open my eyes
shouldve seen it
shouldve known better
and its getting worse
cant change this weather

here I am now im done
never needed anyone
no-one here to push me through
no-one to remind me of you

you come and get up my hopes
than smash them down no way to cope
and I react to it like a surprise
maybe should open my eyes
shouldve seen it
shouldve known better
and its getting worse
cant change this weather

ya you know me
hey and you told me
and I feel so real
and I drift away as your eyes wonder [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 43 [informant] => rawjer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Cant change this weather

Contributed by rawjer on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



If I had known
that this cloud would turn into a cyclone
I duck and dive
move to the side and try to hide
from you or me I just freeze when I see
no safety now calling now crawling draining me

is the circumstance that im delt
its hard to get your head strait
and its hard to relate
to you or me I just freeze when I see
no exits cant backdown cant walk away here me as I say

you come and get up my hopes
than smash them down no way to cope
and I react to it like a surprise
maybe should open my eyes
shouldve seen it
shouldve known better
and its getting worse
cant change this weather

ya you know me
hey and you told me
and I feel so real
and I drift away as your eyes wonder

and now Im lost not to find
think that I am past my time
and I shouldve known
and I shouldve known
that I could never be happy
in this world that drags me down
and Im feeling really crappy
evertime that you come around

you come and get up my hopes
than smash them down no way to cope
and I react to it like a surprise
maybe should open my eyes
shouldve seen it
shouldve known better
and its getting worse
cant change this weather

here I am now im done
never needed anyone
no-one here to push me through
no-one to remind me of you

you come and get up my hopes
than smash them down no way to cope
and I react to it like a surprise
maybe should open my eyes
shouldve seen it
shouldve known better
and its getting worse
cant change this weather

ya you know me
hey and you told me
and I feel so real
and I drift away as your eyes wonder




Copyright © rawjer ... [ 2002-11-13 22:00:00]
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Re: Cant change this weather (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 02:39:28 AM AEST
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I liked this a lot although with the title I was'nt expecting this at all,Good write! Christina


Re: Cant change this weather (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:40:45 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one, it's
very different and creative
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.




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