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[aid] => mick
[title] => what's goin' on
[time] => 2004-10-06 19:34:57
[hometext] => this is only what i have so far and i don't think it's very good but let me know what you think. and when i finish it i will put the finished version up.good or bad criticism is welcome
[bodytext] => I was sitting here thinking but all i could think about was you you tell me your not in love with me but how could that be true because when we danced you held me so close i could feel your every breath (chorus) I just wanna know what's goin on do you want me or do you just wanna be friends? Just let me know baby so i can stop myself from fallin in love I just wanna know whats goin on whenever i'm around you i feel so good you made me feel like there was no one else in the world (repeat the chorus X2) there is going to be one more verse and another repeat of the chorus i think [comments] => 8 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 34 [informant] => linagalMBfan01 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
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