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[sid] => 66409
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Children
[time] => 2004-10-06 22:56:55
[hometext] => I tried the Pantoum style for creative writing... first time doing this... any suggestions or comments?
[bodytext] => Children's eyes are always open, they can see your hidden pain. Children's ears always listen, they hear your wordless tearstain. They can see your hidden pain, children will heal with innocent touch. They hear your wordless tearstain, even broken they can be your crutch. Children will heal with innocent touch, soft and sweet as a butterfly's wings. Even broken they can be your crutch, they masterfully pluck and play your heartstrings. Soft and sweet as a butterfly's wings, children's ears always listen. They masterfully pluck and play your heartstrings, children's eyes are always open. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 43 [informant] => waos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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