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Array ( [sid] => 6643 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Friendship is Forever, right??? [time] => 2002-11-14 00:30:00 [hometext] => um, hey, this is about my best friend, or she used to be, anyway. she went away for the summer and came back a completely different person. she wants nothing to do with me, and it really tears me apart, because we used to be so close. comments please! [bodytext] => if friendship is forever,
then has the world's end come?
if laughter lasts a lifetime,
then is my life now done?
if hope is the heart's anchor,
then mine must be lost at sea.

we talked of future things,
of things yet to come,
we dreamed of little things,
like the rising of the sun,
and as we walked together,
done that path called life,
we walked side by side,
and hand in hand,
then, our path split into two,
one made for me, one for you.

and as this treasured bond does break,
i pray that one day our paths will again cross,
and as you go something else you take,
you take my heart at my great cost,
for in you i thought i had a friend,
but to you, guess that wasnt true,
you leave me a broken heart to mend,
so, fair person this is all that i have to say to you.




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Friendship is Forever, right???

Contributed by nightrider on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



if friendship is forever,
then has the world's end come?
if laughter lasts a lifetime,
then is my life now done?
if hope is the heart's anchor,
then mine must be lost at sea.

we talked of future things,
of things yet to come,
we dreamed of little things,
like the rising of the sun,
and as we walked together,
done that path called life,
we walked side by side,
and hand in hand,
then, our path split into two,
one made for me, one for you.

and as this treasured bond does break,
i pray that one day our paths will again cross,
and as you go something else you take,
you take my heart at my great cost,
for in you i thought i had a friend,
but to you, guess that wasnt true,
you leave me a broken heart to mend,
so, fair person this is all that i have to say to you.








Copyright © nightrider ... [ 2002-11-14 00:30:00]
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 12:39:00 AM AEST
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great write of feelings, true freindship never dies, she might just need some space


Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 01:34:05 AM AEST
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I can really relate to this... I'm going through something of the same right now with my "best friend"... good luck


Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 02:36:05 AM AEST
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she might be confused as to who she is,maybe someone lead her down a wrong path,if you show her your still a faithful friend she will come back to you! Christina


Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 02:44:12 AM AEST
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this is so touching. great poem. loved it. write more!


Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:58:29 AM AEST
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Lovely poem ..... nice words. I hope you work things out.


Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:45:24 AM AEST
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This is so sad , this hit home
with me alot because of the way
i feel about "friends". I really enjoyed
this one, Thanks for sharing it
very beautifully written
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 09:58:41 AM AEST
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Curse her! i hate that, people shouldnt do that. they shouldnt leave their friends! its not right! thats a good poem buddy. now i shall go read the rest! who - ha - ha - ha!!!!! O_o


Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:18:05 AM AEST
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Sorry to hear that your friend treated you that way. Anyway, good poem! :-)


Re: Friendship is Forever, right??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Gin on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 09:10:32 PM AEST
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This is one of the best poems that I have ever read...I think that you should give this poem to that friend of yours...let her know how you feel...If she still turns away at least you let off your chest how you feel.




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