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Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
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Oh, my smile, where should you be, did he take you home with thee,
How I miss my little one, Ailie Anna, we had such fun,
How must I take, the summer sun, when my eyes have but the rains,
shall my Ailie share her smiley, to take away such pains,
Who would of known you'd float away, so quick on snowy day,
shall I bring my smile back, the one I put away,
Ailie Anna, how we miss the smiles that you brought, and all the memories that you left for us, it seems we feel caught,
Oh, little one, of sixteen years, who marked our hearts with such be tears,
shall you know you brought such smiles, be such the little years,
Oh my smile shall never fade, be you young and now set free,
should it be our Ailie Anna, the angel that we see,
Little one, what should we do, should we think about the sun,
and remember we had a cherub, be your years on earth be done,
Little smile we taught you well, be the rainbow we now see,
I taught you of his promise, and he granted it for thee,
Ailie Anna, Smiley Anna, you are now, home free!
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Ailie last words were "I Feel safe" and then she passed
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
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2002-11-14 04:00:00]
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Re: Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
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by Nessiecat on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:10:13 AM AEST
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Hi Valerie
What beautiful words you've written about little Ailie. Your poem paints a vivid picture of her and the wonderful love you share.
As you say, she's home now, but I'm sure she'll always be holding your hand, too. |
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Re: Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:16:08 AM AEST
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| Val,she is safe & thats nice to know that nothing can hurt her any more,So she is smileing now!!! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
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by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:19:23 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful, i really
enjoyed this alot, brought tears
to my eyes actually.
.::��`�..� OreO�..���`::.
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Re: Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
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by Hollie85 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:28:01 AM AEST
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A poem close to the heart.
A very well written poem,
you expressed your emotions
well and can practically imagine
little Allie. |
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Re: Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:35:48 AM AEST
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So very sad... but yet so very beautiful... Your emotions come thru very well...
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
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by Yellowrose on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 08:59:06 AM AEST
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| Little Ailie Anna will always be sealed in your heart. I am sorry she had to depart. Draw comfort from all of her memories. What a beautiful tribue to her. One can feel your love and sorrow . BRILLIANT. writing, straight from the heart. (((Hugs))) Yellowrose. |
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Re: Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 10:35:23 AM AEST
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Valerie no wonder you write such incisive verse. You have been through so much.
I'm such a coward and can only take small doses. That tells you how good it is. |
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Re: Little Smiley ........ Oh, Our Ailie'
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:25:46 PM AEST
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| This is a very nice tribute. I was hanging onto every word. Very beautiful write Valerie. *S* Cynthia |
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