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Because... I love You...
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:18:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I look into your eyes... I can feel your pain... burning deep inside It's transferred between us... Flowing so free... Flooding our souls
But I still can't imagine your pain... The pain... you feel each and every night I just can't imagine... what you're going through Each and every time... I wish that I could help you... My heart breaks... in two... each time I see your pain And I can feel it filter through your voice... Each time you speak to me
You know... babe... I love you... But there's nothing... I can say or even do That will help you I can feel you drowning deep inside your pain It's swim or die... As the pain echoes through your mind Thoughts and feelings resounding through time Like a lifetime of memories... Fading from the heart Leaving not a trace behind... Blending into the nothingness of life
But our lives are like ripples upon the pond We touch each lives... in ways... We don't even know or understand We touch both foe and friend We let our love flow... to the end 'Cause our actions are everlasting impressions Our words may one day cease to exist But our actions speak louder than our words... Echoing on through time
From the very moment... When I first held you in my arms You've been one of the most perfect expressions... In my life... A melody of love
You say... that I've saved your life in every possible way... I've heard that many... many times before But I've have no idea of the countless lives I've saved Or how many lives I've touched... with no name By just being there... By reaching out with just a word... a touch... a smile If I can save just one life... Then... it's all been worth while...
Because... I love you...
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Re: Because... I love You...
(User Rating: 1 ) by brokenwings on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:22:35 AM AEST (User
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beautiful heartfelt and real...good job
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Re: Because... I love You...
(User Rating: 1 ) by screwup on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:41:54 AM AEST (User
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hey love,
thanks for the poem... love you too. that was a very inspirational write, as always... really thankfull you could always be here for me... great write babe, love you much
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Re: Because... I love You...
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:33:50 PM AEST (User
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Another masterpeice of compassion.
I'm sure she will always cherish this write as she no doubt cherises u.
luv, huggs, proud,
yo momma,
emy |
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