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Array ( [sid] => 66553 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ghost Girl By The Window [time] => 2004-10-08 00:35:18 [hometext] => This Is Why I Feel A Part Of My Self Is Gone One I Never Had [bodytext] => I see you

When you stand by the window

Sometimes I see a reflection

But there is no body there

Sometimes I can even hear you

When you call my name

When I feel down and tired

When I really need someone

I feel you take my hand

It feels so warm

It feels like water

Flowing through sand

I know it is you

Keeping me safe

When I sleep at night

I feel you next to me

It’s never cold when I feel you

We never touch but we still hold hands

You even wipe the tears from my face

How you do the things you do

Why you love me when we never met

Why were you taken from me?

I don’t know why we never had a chance
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Ghost Girl By The Window

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:35:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I see you

When you stand by the window

Sometimes I see a reflection

But there is no body there

Sometimes I can even hear you

When you call my name

When I feel down and tired

When I really need someone

I feel you take my hand

It feels so warm

It feels like water

Flowing through sand

I know it is you

Keeping me safe

When I sleep at night

I feel you next to me

It’s never cold when I feel you

We never touch but we still hold hands

You even wipe the tears from my face

How you do the things you do

Why you love me when we never met

Why were you taken from me?

I don’t know why we never had a chance

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-10-08 00:35:18]
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Re: Ghost Girl By The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:48:21 AM AEST
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this hit me deep... the ache in this poem is
just so real and poignant (I guess that's the
right word I dunno). A beautiful poem... thnx
for sharing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Ghost Girl By The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:53:36 AM AEST
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awww a tragically sad write, made me really feel your pain,

pixie xx

Re: Ghost Girl By The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:26:33 PM AEST
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I wish this poem was true because I wouldn't mind seeing a ghost by the window. I wish I could see a
ghost.

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