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[aid] => mick
[title] => Visitation
[time] => 2004-10-08 21:51:54
[hometext] => This is a revision of this made it real- not much different- its actually how i originally worte it, but then when i went to write it on here i didn't have it in front of me, so it came out different.
[bodytext] => Mourning, grieving, dressed in black- All because you'll never come back. I went to say my last goodbye, How could they come high? I stood there, in that room Smelling of flowers, salt and death So that I could see you before you were at your tomb. I couldn't bring myself to walk over, At least not alone, so I walked with her. But it wasn't right, no it was all wrong Because normally you would be playing guitar and singing a song This was different Your body lie cold and lifeless, fingers straight, not bent. So unatural, cold to the touch. This made me cry far too much. I didn't want to be there, but I just couldn't leave Because I wanted to make sure you'd recieve All my tears and prayers that you were heaven. I cried so much, because I loved you, Kevin. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 39 [informant] => silent_tears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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