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Array ( [sid] => 66774 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => trails of blood [time] => 2004-10-09 22:01:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The tears that fell down
From my eyes
Are filled with blood
From anger inside

In my hand
The knife I hold
Is like the anger
You unfold

The trails of blood
Is all I can find
It’s the only thing
To ease my mind

I cant do noting
Right I see
So let me die
Just kill me

Why wont the knife
Go deep enuf
What will it take
To lose your love
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trails of blood

Contributed by tractorbabe on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:01:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The tears that fell down
From my eyes
Are filled with blood
From anger inside

In my hand
The knife I hold
Is like the anger
You unfold

The trails of blood
Is all I can find
It’s the only thing
To ease my mind

I cant do noting
Right I see
So let me die
Just kill me

Why wont the knife
Go deep enuf
What will it take
To lose your love

Copyright Â© tractorbabe ... [ 2004-10-09 22:01:56]
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Re: trails of blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:41:44 PM AEST
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you expressed your talent very well. =]

Re: trails of blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:34:30 AM AEST
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I have only been on this site a few days and there have been a lot of poems about self abuse to ease the pain. I loved your poem, maybe becasue I can realte to it all too well. It was simple but so deep. Many cannot understand, but I do and I aplaud you for your honesty.

Re: trails of blood (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:28:57 AM AEST
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this was a breath taking poem... short and some what dark... you did a great job expressing your emotions, keep up the good work.
~screwup

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