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Array ( [sid] => 66844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies. [time] => 2004-10-10 13:37:54 [hometext] => To Naz, Breezy, theMoth, xafflictedx, eyesxcriedxout1989, and any other poet/ess who cares about these other poets and what we do. [bodytext] => Bitter tongues twisted in the type and font.
Spilling blood with the loosened arrow of words.
Creatures blasting an unwelcome and unflattering message of hope.
Hope resting on our lips,
Like a bullet rests before the hammer.
Waiting to shatter the heirarchy with honesty.
Hauntingly we show up,
A phantom of the Forum,
Disillusioned to the drunken stupidty of rhyme,
No one inflicts us with impunity.
Give us your sickness and infirmaries.
Make us ill, make us suffer, make us hate.
Writing with this disease we will still carry on.
Some of you died without it,
Be we continue with it.
A child of passion and retribution.
You vomited at what we did,
And what we said.
A scroll of honey,
Turned sour on the bowels.
Remember this when you too have died,
And your muse has left.
Cutting her wrists at how pathetic the pain really is,
Sobbing in her room while she burns herself.
Self-inflicted punishment,
For the things she wants to be.
Let the muse die.
Hopeless hearts yearning to bleed for it.
Just let it die.
Finding yourself a grave countenance is all that's left.
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Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies.

Contributed by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Bitter tongues twisted in the type and font.
Spilling blood with the loosened arrow of words.
Creatures blasting an unwelcome and unflattering message of hope.
Hope resting on our lips,
Like a bullet rests before the hammer.
Waiting to shatter the heirarchy with honesty.
Hauntingly we show up,
A phantom of the Forum,
Disillusioned to the drunken stupidty of rhyme,
No one inflicts us with impunity.
Give us your sickness and infirmaries.
Make us ill, make us suffer, make us hate.
Writing with this disease we will still carry on.
Some of you died without it,
Be we continue with it.
A child of passion and retribution.
You vomited at what we did,
And what we said.
A scroll of honey,
Turned sour on the bowels.
Remember this when you too have died,
And your muse has left.
Cutting her wrists at how pathetic the pain really is,
Sobbing in her room while she burns herself.
Self-inflicted punishment,
For the things she wants to be.
Let the muse die.
Hopeless hearts yearning to bleed for it.
Just let it die.
Finding yourself a grave countenance is all that's left.




Copyright © deadreckoning1983 ... [ 2004-10-10 13:37:54]
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Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:15:24 PM AEST
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Dane,
Excellent write. Brave words.Truthful. Unabashed and unreserved.
Bravo!
My hat is off to you this day, with my
heartfelt admiration.

~Breezy


Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies. (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:18:04 PM AEST
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Too freakin Cool!

Can't believe it!
Your gift can be so cruel.
This is a spirited attack
spoken as only you could
speak it. I will be reading
this one a million times over.

--Mothy



Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies. (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 07:48:51 PM AEST
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I'm quoting theMoth here, as it was "TOO freakin' cool"

You are such an awesome writer Dane, words flowing like blood through veins...Awesome name too

Mason


Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:40:54 AM AEST
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Very strong write!
A bit sad but very wel l said.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies. (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:22:13 PM AEST
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Yeah Buddy, Git 'er done !!!!

Holy slit shippers, Batman !!!

Dane ~ this is incredible. Wow !!!

Naz ~


Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies. (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:13:01 PM AEST
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ohh..wow i really enjoyed this. Very good write..you really have talent.. =]




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