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Every day and every night

And are reborn the next

Just the same as before

Nothing in their features change

That’s why we think they just fade away

To the point they can’t be seen

But they do die I can feel it when they do

Just like I felt it when you died

Just like I still feel you

But you won’t come back

No matter how much I want you too

Not even if I start to pray again

I sometimes wish to end my life

Maybe then I will see you

Because I don’t even have your ghost

To keep me company

I don’t want to be with anyone else

I never did and I still won’t

Betray you and what we had

If you were here you would want me to live

And I am sure you want me to move on

But I can’t its not easy to

When the only one I ever loved was you
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The moon and sun die Every day and every night

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:12:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The moon and sun die

Every day and every night

And are reborn the next

Just the same as before

Nothing in their features change

That’s why we think they just fade away

To the point they can’t be seen

But they do die I can feel it when they do

Just like I felt it when you died

Just like I still feel you

But you won’t come back

No matter how much I want you too

Not even if I start to pray again

I sometimes wish to end my life

Maybe then I will see you

Because I don’t even have your ghost

To keep me company

I don’t want to be with anyone else

I never did and I still won’t

Betray you and what we had

If you were here you would want me to live

And I am sure you want me to move on

But I can’t its not easy to

When the only one I ever loved was you

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-10-10 15:12:02]
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Re: The moon and sun die Every day and every night (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:18:59 PM AEST
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wow, this was a very sad and deep emotional write... I am sorry for your pain... you ever need to talk you can email/pm me... I'll be here.
~screwup

Re: The moon and sun die Every day and every night (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:00:59 PM AEST
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I agree,
very sad and emotional. I'm so srry for your lost. Hang tuff, my friend. Life goes on even tho very hurtfull and sad at times.
luv, huggs,prayer, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy

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