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Poor little me...

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:25:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Look at me
I'm dead can't you see
This lonelness
It's taking over me
I've tried smiling
Like you said
But that's just false
and it's just dead
I've tried to be happy
Really i have
But that's just crazy
When you feel dead inside
I wish i could be loved
When i love another
it's just so hard
When it can't be staisfied
I'm better off saying goodbye
It's easier you see
Because i don't have to face this pain in me

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-10-10 18:25:45]
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Re: Poor little me... (User Rating: 1 )
by shadowmoon on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:37:00 PM AEST
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I loves this one. Im glade you no longer feel this way.
Love
Shadowmoon

Re: Poor little me... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:14:29 PM AEST
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vERY SAD BUT WRITTEN WELL. i TOO AM HAPPY THAT U NO LONGER FEEL THIS WAY.
LUV, HUGGS, SMILES,
EMY

Re: Poor little me... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:28:15 PM AEST
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I glad you are not feeling this way anymore. Great write.

Spazzo

Re: Poor little me... (User Rating: 1 )
by blackeyedgirl on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:40:17 PM AEST
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hey this was great. i know how it can be. and thank you for saying what you said in your comment on my suicide poem. I appreciated it. Well great job.

brittney

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