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Not even a tick of the clock seamed real.
The only thing I hear is the sound of your breath.

My mind shuts down.
All I can think of are the things around us.
Your racing heart beat.
This mortal sin.
As I taste your mouth,
Your strong arms raped around me.
I feel so safe.

All alone tucked away from the rest of the world.
I wish only that this moment could last through enternity.
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In This Moment

Contributed by shadowmoon on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:55:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Within a moment all time stood still.
Not even a tick of the clock seamed real.
The only thing I hear is the sound of your breath.

My mind shuts down.
All I can think of are the things around us.
Your racing heart beat.
This mortal sin.
As I taste your mouth,
Your strong arms raped around me.
I feel so safe.

All alone tucked away from the rest of the world.
I wish only that this moment could last through enternity.

Copyright © shadowmoon ... [ 2004-10-10 18:55:20]
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Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 07:20:34 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, heavenly write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 07:26:23 PM AEST
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Aww, this is such a sweet, touchingly loving poem. Love it; great job :).

--Nora

Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:56:55 PM AEST
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Strong and meaningful write. I like this.

Laurie

Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:26:03 PM AEST
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This is a very touching meaningful write.

Spazzo

Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:31:01 PM AEST
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This is amazing. Great write! Can't wait to read more. The way you put this together is a bit unusual but it works great. Love it! Write on, shadowmoon, write on!
Thumps ; 0)

Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 07:40:53 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, shadowmoon!

What a great first post... full of passion! (Watch those typos though... you've got "raped" instead of "wrapped", etc.)

Looking forward to reading more of your work,
SNM

Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:14:31 PM AEST
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Wat another great write shadowmoon. Good write. I loved it. very good. But you had one bad spelling on "rapped" its supose to be "wrapped". well I hope you like to read and comment on my poems.
Baby_Grl

Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 03:40:09 PM AEST
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this is a very good poem very touching i like and thank u for reading some of mine well ttyl bye bye

DEMON A.K.A ABBADON

Re: In This Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by gah_veh on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:44:45 PM AEST
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very nice ive felt like that before it kinda between yes and no

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