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Its not because I'm not happy with you and what we've found together.
Its not because I don't know that you'll always care and that you'll be with me.
Its not even because we have to wait awhile for our lives together because we already share our lives.
But sometimes I just need you to hold me.
And comfort me.
Just to reassure me that the dream we share is real.
And when I feel sad, its just my way of letting you know that I care for you more then ever before.
I don't ever want to lose you.
When you are away from me, I worry sometimes that something will happen to you and that might take you away from me.
I know I should only have good thoughts but I guess I'm a little insecure.
I can't help but worry because you're the best thing that has happened in my life.
You mean everything to me and I don't ever want to lose you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Apardame [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Sometimes

Contributed by Apardame on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:53:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Sometimes I feel sad and I'm not sure if you understand why.
Its not because I'm not happy with you and what we've found together.
Its not because I don't know that you'll always care and that you'll be with me.
Its not even because we have to wait awhile for our lives together because we already share our lives.
But sometimes I just need you to hold me.
And comfort me.
Just to reassure me that the dream we share is real.
And when I feel sad, its just my way of letting you know that I care for you more then ever before.
I don't ever want to lose you.
When you are away from me, I worry sometimes that something will happen to you and that might take you away from me.
I know I should only have good thoughts but I guess I'm a little insecure.
I can't help but worry because you're the best thing that has happened in my life.
You mean everything to me and I don't ever want to lose you.

Copyright © Apardame ... [ 2004-10-10 21:53:58]
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Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:56:47 PM AEST
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I love this. Great write.

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:14:45 PM AEST
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Great write....I can identify...
Jenni

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by shanarah on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:17:42 PM AEST
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thumbs up!! great write, I can relate too!!
take care,
shanarah...

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