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[title] => Pain And Suffering
[time] => 2004-10-11 03:18:11
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[bodytext] => Ill paint you a picture
ill paint it with a twist
ill paint it with a razor blade
ill paint it with my wrist
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Pain And Suffering
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sophie_taylor
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:18:11 AM in AEST
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Ill paint you a picture
ill paint it with a twist
ill paint it with a razor blade
ill paint it with my wrist
Copyright ©
sophie_taylor
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2004-10-11 03:18:11]
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Re: Pain And Suffering
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:37:06 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Pain And Suffering
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:50:49 AM AEST
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| i know just how you feel here as i'm in the same boat as you. i like it how this is simple and short but with the extremely powerful message. |
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Re: Pain And Suffering
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:26:14 AM AEST
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| I feel the agony, and the anger, the sharpness of your words, like raining razors, written short yet in a flowing style, and words that are easy to understand, awesome poem. |
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Re: Pain And Suffering
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:57:52 AM AEST
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| Succinct. But I'd like at least three more stanzas to feel your pain, thanks. |
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Re: Pain And Suffering
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:15:14 PM AEST
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this is a great write...i relate to this poem on a high level...short and to the point...great work
Lots of Love
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