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To prefer the rains would change the clouds

Defect of bloods in tastes of bouts

Detest for eyes in eyes are our images

Repair of loves are shameful to be on airs


Tilts have subsided horses that are tired

Climb on back of steels and the times

Strong legs on stilts that are wilted

Human uses wits to balance wills


Connect to skies to blow with clouds

Political men are real hunters

Stones are weapons but bricks are bums

Floods are wastes as tides for lumps


Plums are quarrels as primes to succumbs

What is the principals that over the rules

Tastes the foods but on clouds you soared

Red your lips with bloods and oaths


Swear to young and kiss the asked

The rains are beefs but clouds are arms

Your lips are red and lilies are white

White washes are rains but fine


Launder your cape with moneys in rains

Regimens are clouds but lives are trained

Are those tracts run to utopia

Up to dates are fashions on tops


Country is not steel but bananas in stacks

Pending clouds pour water in shames

Rains are not grey because red are bloods

Despots have arms for peoples in boots


Eyes are blurred on rains courses

Minds are washed like oils and popcorns

Rains are cold clouds are shadows

Lives are many symbols in shades

--------Poem by Cheung Shun Sang=cauchy3-------




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2-clouds in rains(poem)

Contributed by cauchy3 on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:01:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



2-clouds in rains (poem)

To prefer the rains would change the clouds

Defect of bloods in tastes of bouts

Detest for eyes in eyes are our images

Repair of loves are shameful to be on airs


Tilts have subsided horses that are tired

Climb on back of steels and the times

Strong legs on stilts that are wilted

Human uses wits to balance wills


Connect to skies to blow with clouds

Political men are real hunters

Stones are weapons but bricks are bums

Floods are wastes as tides for lumps


Plums are quarrels as primes to succumbs

What is the principals that over the rules

Tastes the foods but on clouds you soared

Red your lips with bloods and oaths


Swear to young and kiss the asked

The rains are beefs but clouds are arms

Your lips are red and lilies are white

White washes are rains but fine


Launder your cape with moneys in rains

Regimens are clouds but lives are trained

Are those tracts run to utopia

Up to dates are fashions on tops


Country is not steel but bananas in stacks

Pending clouds pour water in shames

Rains are not grey because red are bloods

Despots have arms for peoples in boots


Eyes are blurred on rains courses

Minds are washed like oils and popcorns

Rains are cold clouds are shadows

Lives are many symbols in shades

--------Poem by Cheung Shun Sang=cauchy3-------




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Re: 2-clouds in rains(poem) (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:36:10 AM AEST
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In most situations I refrain from commenting on the works that utterly escape my understanding, but in an odd way, this befuddling little peice echoed of my second language--Chinese. Are you, by any chance, a speaker of an asian langauge? The grammar is almost reminiscient of the spoken word I hear each day. If that's true, I'd honestly--and humbly--suggest you find a better program to translate your poem. It sounds like it was something beautiful in chinese--and now it sounds like it's still in Chinese.

Unique.


"He blinked away the sorry days and slept away his fear; In vagrant times his rubble rhymes bereft him of his tears."
~The Palatine Poet


Re: 2-clouds in rains(poem) (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:14:37 AM AEST
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Intirguing way of writing about, sounded like the pouring of emotions, and the many shades of feelings, cool poem.




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