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Array ( [sid] => 66950 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Longing [time] => 2004-10-11 09:47:13 [hometext] => i want to thank every one who commented on my last poem, they real helped me to gain more confidence in my writing. before then i was unsure. thank you all so much ;) [bodytext] => Longing

The endless waiting
The hours, the days
Forever sitting here, where loneliness prevails
Alone with only silence to fear

Days of darkness seen through unlit eyes
Confides my heart, my soul, my mind
Emptiness fills me, love has left me!
Still here waiting, with only silent whispers to comfort me

Always waiting, forever waiting!
Never taking my turn, just failing
Longing for love, yet to love
Still love’s time stands, lost in limbos eyes

Forever longing, always waiting
Love is my wanting
Love is my haunting
Love is my longing
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Longing

Contributed by apoetswhisper on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:47:13 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Longing

The endless waiting
The hours, the days
Forever sitting here, where loneliness prevails
Alone with only silence to fear

Days of darkness seen through unlit eyes
Confides my heart, my soul, my mind
Emptiness fills me, love has left me!
Still here waiting, with only silent whispers to comfort me

Always waiting, forever waiting!
Never taking my turn, just failing
Longing for love, yet to love
Still love’s time stands, lost in limbos eyes

Forever longing, always waiting
Love is my wanting
Love is my haunting
Love is my longing

Copyright Â© apoetswhisper ... [ 2004-10-11 09:47:13]
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Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:00:15 AM AEST
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wow, this was wonderful, I hope that you dont have to long for love for much longer, may it find you,

pixie xx

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by LouisaMontagu on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:23:29 AM AEST
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well done!! an enjoyable n dreamy write
a pleasure to endure

Louisa xx

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:16:39 AM AEST
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awww. such a hungry poem.. great though.

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:59:57 PM AEST
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You have a certain flair to letting the one, who I hope reads this you really know what the true meaning is.......ppl do forget.~

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:01:16 PM AEST
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your longing enpowers this write so beautiful yet sad
Michelle

Re: Longing (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:35:54 PM AEST
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ahhhh A very well concieved write. I love the lines you used. Sad,yet very well done.

Larry

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